FORTEGAVERSO: KILOMETRO 26

viernes, julio 24, 2009

KILOMETRO 26


Extracto del capítulo más raro y más recordado de mi cada vez más añejo primer libro, que tal vez pronto regrese corregido.

KILOMETRO 26

1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,
25,26,27,28,29,30,31,32,33,34,35,36,37,38,39,40,41,42,43,
44,45,46,47,48,49,50,51,52,53,54,55,56,57,58,59,60,61,
62,63,64,65,66,67,68,69,70,71,72,73,74,75,76,77,78,79,
80,81,82,83,84,85,86,87,88,89,90,91,92,93,94,95,96,
97,98,99,100 metros.

101,102,103,104,105,106,107,108,109,110,111,112,113,114,115,116,117,118, 119,120,121,122,123,124,125,126,127,128,129,130,131,132,133,
134,135,136,137138,139,140,141,142,143,144,145,146,147,148,149,
150,151,152,153,154,155,156157,158,159,160,161,162,
163,164,165,166,167,168,169,170,171,172,173,174,175,
176,177,178,179,180,181,182,183,184,185,186,187,188,189,
190,191,192,193,194,195,196,197,198,199,200 metros.

201,202,203,204,205,206,207,208,209,210,211,212,213,214,215,216,217,218, 219,220,221,222,223,224,225,226,227,228,229,
230,231,232,233,234,235,236,237238,239,240,241,242,243,
244,245,246,247,248,249,250,251,252,253,254,255,256257,
258,259,260,261,262,263,264,265,266,267,268,269,270,271,
272,273,274,275276,277,278,279,280,281,282,283,284,285,
286,287,288,289,290,291,292,293,294,295,296,297,298,299,300 metros.

301,302,303,304,305,306,307,308,309,310,311,312,313,314,315,316,317,318, 319,320,321,322,323,324,325,326,327,328,329,330,331,332,333,334,335,336,
337338,339,340,341,342,343,344,345,346,347,348,349,350,351,352,353,354,
355,356357,358,359,360,361,362,363,364,365,366,367,368,369,370,371,372,
373,374,375376,377,378,379,380,381,382,383,384,385,386,387,388,389,390,
391,392,393,394,395,396,397,398,399,400 metros.

401,402,403,404,405,406,407,408,409,410,411,412,413,414,415,416,417,418, 419,420,421,422,423,424,425,426,427,428,429,430,431,432,433,434,435,436,
437438,439,440,441,442,443,444,445,446,447,448,449,450,451,452,453,454,
455,456457,458,459,460,461,462,463,464,465,466,467,468,469,470,471,472
,473,474,475476,477,478,479,480,481,482,483,484,485,486,487,488,489,490,
491,492,493,494,495,496,497,498,499,500 metros.

501,502,503,504,505,506,507,508,509,510,511,512,513,514,515,516,517,518, 519,520,521,522,523,524,525,526,527,528,529,530,531,532,533,534,535,536,
537538,539,540,541,542,543,544,545,546,547,548,549,550,551,552,553,554,
555,556557,558,559,560,561,562,563,564,565,566,567,568,569,570,571,572,
573,574,575576,577,578,579,580,581,582,583,584,585,586,587,588,589,590,
591,592,593,594,595,596,597,598,599,600 metros.

601,602,603,604,605,606,607,608,609,610,611,612,613,614,615,616,617,618,
619,620,621,622,623,624,625,626,627,628,629,630,631,632,633,634,635,636
,637638,639,640,641,642,643,644,645,646,647,648,649,650,651,652,653,654,
655,656657,658,659,660,661,662,663,664,665,666,667,668,669,670,671,672,
673,674,675676,677,678,679,680,681,682,683,684,685,686,687,688,689,690,
691,692,693,694,695,696,697,698,699,700 metros.

701,702,703,704,705,706,707,708,709,710,711,712,713,714,715,716,717,718, 719,720,721,722,723,724,725,726,727,728,729,730,731,732,733,734,735,736
,737738,739,740,741,742,743,744,745,746,747,748,749,750,751,752,753,754,
755,756757,758,759,760,761,762,763,764,765,766,767,768,769,770,771,772,
773,774,775776,777,778,779,780,781,782,783,784,785,786,787,788,789,790,
791,792,793,794,795,796,797,798,799,800 metros.

801,802,803,804,805,806,807,808,809,810,811,812,813,814,815,816,817,818, 819,820,821,822,823,824,825,826,827,828,829,830,831,832,833,834,835,836,
837838,839,840,841,842,843,844,845,846,847,848,849,850,851,852,853,854,
855,856857,858,859,860,861,862,863,864,865,866,867,868,869,870,871,872,
873,874,875876,877,878,879,880,881,882,883,884,885,886,887,888,889,890,
891,892,893,894,895,896,897,898,899,900 metros.

901,902,903,904,905,906,907,908,909,910,911,912,913,914,915,916,917,918 919,920,921,922,923,924,925,926,927,928,929,930,931,932,933,934,935,936,937,
938,939,940,941,942,943,944,945,946,947,948,949,950,951,952,953,954,955,956,
957,958,959,960,961,962,963,964,965,966,967,968,969,970,971,972,973,974,975,
976,977,978,979,980,981,982,983,984,985,986,987,988,989,990,991,992,993,994,
995,996,997,998,999.

1000 metros, otro kilómetro ha pasado.

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6 Comentarios:

A la/s 6:11 p.m., Blogger Juan Claudio Lopez dijo...

muy bueno

 
A la/s 7:05 p.m., Anonymous Ibarra dijo...

Es lo mejor que has escrito en años.

:-)

 
A la/s 7:28 a.m., Blogger bicho maldito dijo...

Me recordó el juego comentado por Bolaño sobre un libro de G. Perec donde faltaba la letra "e".

Ahora, no estoy de acuerdo con la línea 555, 556, 557, 558, pero estoy dispuesto al diálogo. Juá!

 
A la/s 7:47 p.m., Blogger Cristian dijo...

Ojalá lo reediten. Nunca lo pude leer.

Saludos.

 
A la/s 8:21 p.m., Blogger leonardo dijo...

A mí también me parece que en la frase "555, 556, 557, 558 (yo añadiría hasta 587)" hay cierto ripio... Entiendo, claro, que debías mantener la coherencia interna del capítulo, y esa frase era vital para lo subsecuente, pero creo que en la forma hay algo que se pierde. Como que esa parte te salió algo forzada, algo mecánica. Tal vez algún decmal hubiese hecho la diferencia, aprotando cierta agilidad lírica o una profundización que me parece que se hacía necesaria.
En fin, espero que en la versión corregida puedas arreglarlo.
Igual creo que algunas fracciones podrían explicar mejor parte del capítulo.

 
A la/s 11:11 a.m., Blogger Pamela Catalán Segovia dijo...

uy, sí, todavía me acuerdo cuando lo leí, me reí tantooooo. me gusta también ese en que dice "quiero a mi mamita", ajajajaj.

 

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